I'll tell you guys more about the trip later but I need to sleep. But for a small preview, I met someone but I'll give you more details later. You can start imagining for now and I know that some of them will be rated X but try to keep it to a minimum.
Lots of Love,
Sakura






1. Jeanelle Angelline is totally a Mary Sue in her own world. (She has 25 jewels, right? When most people have only one? It's overkill no matter how you look at it, you know?)
2. The naming system. The Heaven/Hell theme going on is amateurish and frankly drives me bats.
3. Saetan is pronounced Seetan. If A.B. is trying to make it sound similar to Satan then she should have tried a different spelling.
You asked for my reasons a while ago... so there they are.
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And in the dying summer she said,
Eyes quivering with tears of lead,
As he caressed the crown of her head,
"Yo, damn ghost, get the fuck off my bed!"
Regarding #3, classically the "ae" vowel combination does, more often than not produce the "ee" sound.
I'm just really picky for everything really. It's the same reason why I can't read Eragon or the Pendragon Series.
CORPSE OVER CADAVER
... I'm done... sorry.
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And in the dying summer she said,
Eyes quivering with tears of lead,
As he caressed the crown of her head,
"Yo, damn ghost, get the fuck off my bed!"
How about you? How are you holding up as a college student? Besides the whole suicidal part?
<3
btw, its Kacy
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Hello, I miss you quite terribly
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